Here is the further development of the template for my Spores/Amoebas template... i've added some text, changed the graphics design and just tidied the whole template up... i've done a version with a white box behind the text which i hink makes it clearer to read, but i'm not sure that i like the white box there so ive done a version without it too... the JPEG seems to have squashed the image too, not sure why that is...
Hi Ethan,
ReplyDeleteIf i'm being honest, this interface is looking very 'busy' and, in truth, rather basic in design terms - the text is difficult to read, you've split words over 2 lines, adding to this difficulty. I suggest you drastically re-think the design of your interface; you need to consider your use of negative space; graphically, this resembles a powerpoint presentation (and not a great one either). Sorry to be blunt, but I'm amazed that this visual template has taken you four weeks to evolve; this kind of material already exists out there and it's your job to innovate!